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FICTION STORIES: EXPLICIT 1.3 ( The chain reaction) by ENNY KASTIEL (A MUST READ)!!!!





3 tribes represented. We walked in majestically. He has a receptionist , wierd.
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" We are here to see the Oracle Man "
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"He is busy with some clients , you can sit there and wait for him"
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30 mins later , we were summoned . We entered into the beautiful ambience of his office. Oracle man didn't look fetish neither did he look like he was from any country of my knowing. We took turns talking ...
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"We are the Elders of our country "
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Oracle man : I know.
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" Our country is declining rapidly . Every generation is worse. We are here to see the future of the country "
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Oracle man : I know .
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" We came from very far away to see you , we hope you can show us what will become of our offsprings '
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Oracle man : Okay.
(He looks at our wrinkled faces for the next 5 minutes . Then , he speaks up )
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"Close your eyes" . We did as we were told.
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I suddenly saw a man in a black suit standing on a podium. My country's Flag behind him . The people were cheering and screaming , clapping. I could feel the euphoria in the air as I watched. He was fluent , there was brilliance in his words. It took me a while to figure out I was looking at the President. I skimmed with my eyes. I saw the two I came with and we decided to look around. Within minutes , we realized we were in a futuristic version of our Country.
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There were beautiful cars everywhere , beautiful buildings . I could see true happiness on the faces of the people that walked on the street. We smiled as we walked the streets realizing our country was going to be better after all. We approached one of the people by the roadside and we asked in Unism ' What year is this ?' . He looked at us awkwardly as he replied ' Year 2060 ' . Wow , that means this will definitely take a while to happen. So we decided to ask more questions.
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Curiously , we posed the question " Are you happy with the state of the country ? "
He replied with enthusiasm " Oga , I no fi lie . Everything make sense for this President Regime "
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We all smiled as we heard him speak the pidgin English even in the year 2060
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So we continued one after the other ,
" So he is doing a good job ? "
"What are the things he has done ? "
" And most importantly , how did he curb corruption ?"
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He replied again with so much eagerness .
" Good job sef no reach if we wan talk wetin him don do"
"Thief thief no dey again , Light dey , Water dey . We dey chop well !!! My Ogas , as I no get money reach. My pikin dem dey go better school . "
" Corruption .Hmm . President get strong hand o. If e catch person dey thief thief. With gun or na biro e use thief the thief. Na death o!"
"No begging o my Ogas. One of him cousin thief money for Senate. Na last 2 weeks them hang am "
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We were wowed. His methods are extreme , yes but the results are overwhelming. We thanked the man for granting us audience. We walked around a little bit more. We went to public schools , we visited few houses and asked more questions. We looked different , our outfits were from the past but the people were very hospitable. This was not the usual behaviour of the people from my country. From the year we are from , people are scared to be kind because it might be used against them . But the people of 2060 were very different. We kept moving. We had spent hours in the year and were famished. We decided to eat. As we were about to step into a restaurant . A voice called out to us. It was the oracle man. He smiled as he said " You have seen enough , it is time to leave "
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He smiled again and a silent wind blew.
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We were back to our seats in his office. We were more than delighted as we each stood up to shake him. He smiled back at us. We decided to take our leave and we promised to make a generous payment to the receptionist. A wierd form of payment but a worthwhile one. As we approached the door and were about to leave. He called out to us " Wait ! " . We turned back and his eyes were closed. He said " The future of your country just changed again " . We were curious now..
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He continued ,
" A certain Tunde just provided an amount of money for a D and C procedure "
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We argued amongst us till we figured a D and C meant an Abortion . So one of us replied " How does that concern us and how does it change the future sir ?"
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His eyes closed still as he said " The procedure will take place exactly 11.32 am tommorow "
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I answered " Sir , what does that have to do with the future ? "
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He opened his eyes and he said to us " The child that will be aborted 11.32 am tommorow is supposed to be the President in the year 2060"
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Before we could ask more questions. The oracle man rang the bell for another visitor to come in. We would have to wait another 10 years to book a session. We silently left and went in search of TUNDE..........
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EXPLICIT 1.3 ( The chain reaction)
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Written by Enny Kastiel.



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